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-\title{eNM-Ontoviewer: interactive visualisation of SPARQL queries for eNanoMapper ontologies and data}
+\title{eNM-Ontoviewer: Interactive visualisation of SPARQL queries for eNanoMapper ontologies and data}
 \author{D. Gebele, M. Rautenberg, C. Helma}
 \institute{\emph{in silico} toxicology gmbh, Basel, Switzerland}
 \footer{Contact: \texttt{support@in-silico.ch}. Information: \texttt{www.in-silico.ch}}
@@ -33,8 +33,8 @@
     
     \begin{textblock}{62}(20,18)
       \justifying
-      \begin{block}{Use case 1: Investigate the eNanoMapper Ontology}
-        Assuming that we are interested in \emph{toxicological endpoints} we execute the template SPARQL query to receive results either as a static graphic named \emph{Dendogram} (Figure 1) or as a interactive graphic named \emph{Sunburst} (Figure 2). To get all depending information to our subject we can now use the SPARQL interface (Figure 4) and write another query. We are always able to refine our query from step 2 or investigate direct any kind of URIs from the result (Figure 5).
+      \begin{block}{Use case 1: Investigate the eNanoMapper ontology}
+        Assuming that we are interested in \emph{toxicological endpoints} we execute the template SPARQL query to receive results either as a static \emph{Dendogram} graph \emph{(Figure 1)} or as an interactive \emph{Sunburst} graph \emph{(Figure 2)}. To get all information about a subject we can use the SPARQL interface \emph{(Figure 4)} and write another query. We are always able to refine our query or investigate directly any kind of URIs from the result \emph{(Figure 5)}.
         \begin{figure}
           \hspace{-0.15\textwidth}
           \begin{subfigure}[c]{0.3\textwidth}
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@
           \hspace{0.25\textwidth}
           \begin{subfigure}[c]{0.2\textwidth}
             \includegraphics[width=\textwidth,keepaspectratio]{onto-use-case-1b.png}
-            \caption{Figure 3: Sunburst. Interactive zoom on 'dermal toxicity' endpoint.}
+            \caption{Figure 3: Sunburst. Interactive zoom on \emph{dermal toxicity} endpoint.}
           \end{subfigure}
         \end{figure}
         \vspace{0.05\textwidth}
@@ -53,12 +53,12 @@
           \hspace{-0.1\textwidth}
           \begin{subfigure}[c]{0.3\textwidth}
             \includegraphics[width=\textwidth,keepaspectratio]{onto-use-case-1c.png}
-            \caption{Figure 4: SPARQL interface. Take \emph{skin sensitization} subclass endpoint from Figure 3 for a detail query.}
+            \caption{Figure 4: SPARQL interface. Select \emph{skin sensitization} subclass endpoint from \emph{Figure 3} for a detail query.}
           \end{subfigure}
           \hspace{0.2\textwidth}
           \begin{subfigure}[c]{0.3\textwidth}
             \includegraphics[width=\textwidth,keepaspectratio]{onto-use-case-1d.png}
-            \caption{Figure 5: Following a link from query result in \emph{Figure 4} we get pointed to the eNanoMapper ontology on BioPortal.}
+            \caption{Figure 5: Following a link from the query result in \emph{Figure 4} we reach the eNanoMapper ontology on BioPortal.}
           \end{subfigure}
         \end{figure}
       \end{block}
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     \begin{textblock}{62}(20,70)
       \justifying
-      \begin{block}{Use case 2: Investigate the eNanoMapper Data}
-        Assuming that we want to investigate eNanoMapper nano material data we can simply choose one of the given SPARQL examples (Figure 1) as a starting point. In this case we are interessted in \emph{surface charge} and search for the zeta potential and its values. We receive a table with values and resource identifiers which point us direct to the resource page within eNanoMapper data service (Figure 7).
+      \begin{block}{Use case 2: Investigate eNanoMapper data}
+        Assuming that we want to investigate eNanoMapper nano material data we can simply choose one of the given SPARQL examples \emph{(Figure 6)} as a starting point. In this case we are interested in \emph{surface charge} and search for the zeta potential and its values. We receive a table with values and resource identifiers which point us directly to the resource page of the eNanoMapper database service \emph{(Figure 7)}.
         \begin{figure}
           %\centering
           \vspace{0.05\textwidth}
           \hspace{-0.1\textwidth}
           \begin{subfigure}[c]{0.3\textwidth}
             \includegraphics[width=\textwidth,keepaspectratio]{onto-use-case-2a.png}
-            \caption{Figure 6: SPARQL interface. Choosen one of the "Physio-Chemical Characteristics" examples.}
+            \caption{Figure 6: SPARQL interface. Select one of the \emph{physio-chemical characteristics} examples.}
           \end{subfigure}
           \hspace{0.2\textwidth}
           \begin{subfigure}[c]{0.4\textwidth}
             \includegraphics[width=\textwidth,keepaspectratio]{onto-use-case-2b.png}
-            \caption{Figure 7: Follow link from query result in Figure 6 points to eNanoMapper data store.}
+            \caption{Figure 7: Following a link from the query result in \emph{Figure 6} we reach the eNanoMapper database service.}
           \end{subfigure}
         \end{figure}
       \end{block}